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Rev 2, I fixed it to always resize to the monitor you are using to view
Also played with the background color, I'm still not happy with it. It needs to be more sand color but this is better than the brownish pink I started with.
 
Rev3.
I think I got the back ground right, to my eye anyway.
Modified the text to center justify and edited the content a little
Added the TLCA logo at the bottom of the page.
 
The body of text might be easier to read if it was larger or bold. Or maybe it's just my monitor!
 
looks good to me!

K
 
I offer the following suggestions … Rather than open the paragraph with the club's acronym, write out Battle Born Cruisers (probably not necessary to add 'of Northern Nevada because that's a mouthful and we have the full club name heading the page). Just a branding thing. Better to use the name because people can identify with that easier than an acronmym. Gives us personality too.

Change "orientated" to "oriented"
"BBCNN is a Toyota orientated 4x4 club based"

Probably work in our favor as well to add a line about our collective love for the outdoors, keeping trails better than we found them, promoting outdoor awareness, participating in trail clean ups, etc.

And then when it comes to welcoming newcomers to ask questions, ought to fix the typo on questions

"to ask questiond about your Toyota"

Hope that's helpful,

Keith
 
I offer the following suggestions … Rather than open the paragraph with the club's acronym, write out Battle Born Cruisers (probably not necessary to add 'of Northern Nevada because that's a mouthful and we have the full club name heading the page). Just a branding thing. Better to use the name because people can identify with that easier than an acronmym. Gives us personality too.

Change "orientated" to "oriented"
"BBCNN is a Toyota orientated 4x4 club based"

Probably work in our favor as well to add a line about our collective love for the outdoors, keeping trails better than we found them, promoting outdoor awareness, participating in trail clean ups, etc.

And then when it comes to welcoming newcomers to ask questions, ought to fix the typo on questions

"to ask questiond about your Toyota"

Hope that's helpful,

Keith

Very helpful, this is why I didn't want to do the text to begin with. :grinpimp:
If you want to edit the text and PM it to me I'll make the changes next week, I have no pride of authorship and am glad to defer to a professional. I'm sure the other Dan is okay with that as well.
 
Very helpful, this is why I didn't want to do the text to begin with. :grinpimp:
If you want to edit the text and PM it to me I'll make the changes next week, I have no pride of authorship and am glad to defer to a professional. I'm sure the other Dan is okay with that as well.


Absolutely! Keith: Your input is most valued!!!



The 3rd Dan...
 
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Good start Dan(s). However, Just kidding.;)
To me the font of the title needs something different. Either a different color font outline or font color itself. I like the background.
And as Dan S stated, the text size 1-2 points larger? I also think the text should be left justified.
All in all, a great job. I will send a mass mailing directing to this thread. In last month’s minutes I did mention this forum as being the primary one for up to date.

Mike
 
Good start Dan(s). However, Just kidding.;)
To me the font of the title needs something different. Either a different color font outline or font color itself. I like the background.
And as Dan S stated, the text size 1-2 points larger? I also think the text should be left justified.
All in all, a great job. I will send a mass mailing directing to this thread. In last month’s minutes I did mention this forum as being the primary one for up to date.

Mike
RE:Page title font
Maybe match the back ground of the banner in the logo and outline in black?

RE:body text
I can do a bold +1pt text Tuesday when I get to work, if time allows.

RE:text justification
I'll change it so we can look at it. Whatever the majority wants is fine with me.
 
Ok...to repeat from above (God we're bossy ain't we :eek:)...change "orientated" to "oriented"...and change "questiond"...

...lastly: Do we want this: "We also have monthly meetings that are open to anyone interested in 4-wheeling any make of vehicle" to convey we are open to any make of vehicle in our club? Bylaws state we are a membership consisting of Toyota 4WD vehicles I think...
 
IMO...
To be a member you need to own a Toyota, but do you have to own a Toyota to attend the meetings? I personally like all 4wheel drives and would like the opportunity to meet and converse with anyone who enjoys the sport.

I think most people would understand by the club name that we are going to be talking Toyota most of the night and if they are cool with that, so am I.
 
IMO...
To be a member you need to own a Toyota, but do you have to own a Toyota to attend the meetings? I personally like all 4wheel drives and would like the opportunity to meet and converse with anyone who enjoys the sport.

I think most people would understand by the club name that we are going to be talking Toyota most of the night and if they are cool with that, so am I.


Correct...you don't need to be a Toyota 4WD owner to visit the club meetings. But you need to be a Toyota 4WD owner & a TLCA (per TLCA regs) member to join the BBCNN.
 
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