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ok, some feedback...

under pricing...

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(pictured w/ upgraded latches, Alu. trim kit, pre-finished wood tops, and flush mounted aircraft rails. not included in standerd kit)"

s/b

(pictured w/ upgraded latches, Alu. trim kit, pre-finished wood tops, and flush mounted aircraft rails. not included in standard kit)

standerd s/b standard... or I'm wrong?

anyways, should be nice to have both prices, without extra stuff, and with the mentioned up-grades, even better, a price for each line of available up-grades, so you could have a better idea of the total amount that you may need to save before placing the order...

but you have so much options that maybe is not even fun to mess with all the data...
 
Looks good. It's clear that you spent some time with it.

Not sure if you were looking for feedback on your product or on the general website look. All in all it looks pretty good, but I have a couple of comments:

Inconsistencies with font. Some places you are using all upper case, some lower case and some places title case (first letter of each word capitalized). An example would be in you main menu: "drawer systems", Pop Top campers" and "Camp kitchens". Title case would look good here.

Spelling issues. I have noticed quite a few mispelled words both in your website and previous posts/advertisements. Not trying to bash on you here, but I would recommend a thorough proof read and if not sure use a resource like MS word or dictionary.com to check spelling/context.

On your Pop-Top campers page you only show a computer rendering of the product, yet at the bottom you say "conversions available now". Maybe show a real life example of some of your work here.

Anyway, I hope you don't take this the wrong way as I think you have some serious skills and make a killer product, but as they say "perception is reality".
 
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Your site looks great Charles! Your products are displayed nicely. There are lots of pictures as well as options so people can get creative with their drawers.
Just a couple suggestions, as this is what I do for a living, I would put your phone number and a contact form on every page of your site as well as remove your email link from the site. Someone can hack your email and spam through your server which will get your site blacklisted through Google (very bad!). I would also suggest converting this site over to a WordPress back-end so you can edit pages in seconds, not to mention it comes with a spell checker built in. Something that might help grow your market share would be to upload your products with pricing to Google checkout. As well as upload your pictures to Google images (this will help with SEO). Also, if you have the time to keep a "work I've done" blog - this will help with conversion (website visitors into phone calls and emails).
I hope you take this as constructive and not destructive. If you need some explanation or translation as to what I suggested above, you have my phone number. I'd be glad to help.
 
Hey Charles, gotta say you do nice work. I like your selection of hardware that allows the customer to customize their set-up how they want it, unique in that market I think.

A couple of things I noticed cruising around your site...

Your "Gallery" pics are very clunky to navigate. Some are too big and you have to scroll from side to side, top to bottom to get the whole picture. You don't want your visitors working so hard to see your hard work. Those pics are great advertisement and really show your stuff, make the best of them and add more with each unique project.

Next and I hate to harp and repeat what's been said, but check and double check for correct spelling.
extention => extension
deviders => dividers
vertion => version
DYI Kit => DIY Kit

I've seen you do some very creative stuff and I'd love to check out one of your finished pop-top campers one day. Good luck with your site and your biz.

Dan.
 
looks awesome!
love the kitchen!!!

great job, cant wait to see the pop top.
 
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